Comments : One night

  • 18 years ago

    by keisha

    Im sorry that happened to you, but now you can help other girls before this happens agin. i feel your pain, i wnet thru the same thing, only he got away with it, your lucky, at least he got what was coming. keep writing and good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    Aww im sorry this happened to you i would have done anything so you wouldnt have gone through that i love u

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    That is the saddest poem of yours I have read. definitly my favorite!!!! it was so unique and I loved it it flowed nicely too. great job

    ~~Retniapdoolb

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awww that's so sad...I'm sorry you wrote about such a topic. It's a hard topic to read or write about..

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. Geez, I hope this really didn't happen to you. =( ..It's so sad.

    A really good poem though, had my attention all the way wanting to know what happens, Your emotions were expressed so clearly that I could actually picture what was going on and how that person would have been feeling. Great poem, hun. Keep it up!! xx.

    Natalie``