Oh wow. This was really sad. Hope it's not really true though. It was an amazing write, the emotions all just poured out. I loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I frikken love this!
The flow is flawless, the rhyme scheme enjoyable and the imagery fantastic,
You did a great job.

The strawberry gashes that Lie on my wrist

That line right there is amazing ive never seen cutting described as that. Really amazing poem. Loved it~mel

Hmm very interesting. The beginning pulled me in, actually the title did haha, but anyways, I think it picked up nearing the end. I loved the ending. This one got to me, something stood out to me, I can't point out what, but son of a gun, I loved this poem lol.

5.5