There's always been an interesting connection between food and sex, which is actually one of the main themes of the movie Tampopo, which I suggest you rent sometime, it's pretty artsy and interesting. Good rhyming, an entertaining poem.

Omg i loved your poem, its so sexy if you dont mind me saying.
its cool, love it 5/5

sarah xx

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That's a really good poem boi
U write well
N good description lol
TTYL
>>MIA

You can be my dessert anytime ;)

Nice poem. its very, well, out there. =) good job

Oh my god! Such a good poem and yet very sweet! Lol! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

This poem is very good. I like how you got your theme across without making the poem seem too sleezy. {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

There good, i cant wait till older. not much fault in this very good. it put a smile on my face, wonder what it put on yours, very good 5/5

Very glad to see something different for a change. Uniquefully, Playfull and well written, great rhymes, great flow, all-around great read...but remind me to knock before ever stepping foot in your kitchen...

Wow.. that was so effin hott! i love your explicit poems, they are just such a turn on! lol.. this one was especially good as it was erotic but still suitable for younger readers! excellent write! really enjoyed reading this one! 5/5

Haha, wow that was a great poem! Really fun and interesting to read. I love the idea, it was so creative...the way you worded it and everything. Awesome write! 5/5

Great poem, your rhyme scheme and the words you chose were original. i think the last stanza is a little sloppy but other than that, great job. you have talent

I loved this
it was well written
and beautiful words and thoughts into this poem

well done!

Hahahaz. I love it. Sweet job. So romantic-ish. :)

5/5.

>black&&blue

See...that poem had much much better imagery and Visualization then the last one I read. It flowed very well and caught the reader from the very beginning. Good job.
I really liked reading you poetry! your a great writer.

~~Retniapdoolb

Nice poem. i like it.

I dont no what to say it was so good i would like to hve dessert before dinner he he

Hahaha love it.

Darien! This was 10 years ago...wonder if you still do this...hahahaha.
Regards, Mel.