by Nate May 23, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
other
THE NOSE KNOWS? |
by Darien
Woohoo! good eye Kim ;) |
by Simon Hayes
Lol! Great write Nate... Very enjoyable, and amusing :) |
by Lydia
I Like this but you've messed up the sylables go like this in your poem thing 9 8 7 6 5 5 3 2 1 just say the words and count along and you'll see it (sorry it was bugging me) |
by Melissa
This is cute, reminds me of Dr. Seauss... Nicely done! ;o) |
by Kim
Lol I liked this poem but I believe you missed a line (the 7 syllable one) ^_^ This was funny and cute, an enjoyable read |