One of the few funny poems that don't need to be funny but are.

Lol I liked this poem but I believe you missed a line (the 7 syllable one) ^_^ This was funny and cute, an enjoyable read

This is cute, reminds me of Dr. Seauss... Nicely done! ;o)

I Like this but you've messed up the sylables go like this in your poem thing 9 8 7 6 5 5 3 2 1 just say the words and count along and you'll see it (sorry it was bugging me)

Lol! Great write Nate... Very enjoyable, and amusing :)

Woohoo! good eye Kim ;)

The 7th line.. bahahha nice :)