Into thine Hands

"Secret—Why do thou haunt thee morning hours?"
if you're doing old modern english (aka shakespearean) then i'd make do = dost, and I think 'thee' should be 'the'
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"Twas soul tears which trickled down fragile face.
Cup mine face into thine hands pure heartbreak."
I feel like t'was has an apostrophe.. but I could be wrong. I'd hypenate soul-tears, because it seems like a phrase. I think a 'your' should go in front of 'fragile' to make the sentence more grammatically correct. I'd avoid using the word 'face' twice so close together... maybe another descriptive noun.
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note: 'thee' means 'you'. If you're trying to say 'my', then that's just 'my', I'm pretty sure. Try checking out this link:
http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/xThou.html
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"Oh misery! Shall thy forever be under spells?"
In this case 'thy' was supposed to mean 'you', but 'thy' means 'your'. I'd use 'thee'.

I thought the poem was well put and thought out. I liked the way you wrote it with the language... i felt like i dont see poems like this often.
-Clαяissα ♥

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

Wow i like the worlds... the old times... it's like a poem from renaissance ot romantic period....

This piece is most excellant, very well written and the descriptions are awsome, very good with the use of old english. 5/5