Good poem:) well written but very sad to read. keep writing..:0) XxX

Hey! i know ive commented on this but i felt like commenting agen seen as you havnt had a new one in a while :0) i hope youre still writing (youd better be lol) cu tomorow, and yes, you get a woo :p XxX

A captivating read... You used good choice of words that potray great description and imagination...

Nicely written...