by Tornia May 23, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The doors are open |
by Cassie Cain
Very well written. i like how you put jesus in this story, except on where you put "jesuses" its not spelled that way tis Jesus' the extra s makes it sound kindda like you dont know how to spell so good, but thats the only mistake i caught so keep up the good work, praise without ceasing. god bless. |