Aww..that is so sad.. but so metaphoric! i loved this! it flowed well and contained so much emotion! excellent write! 5/5

Im on that same page i enjoy reading your stuff keep it comming. u can check out more of mine if u like
jeremy

Simple but has an interesting feeling in it. good work!

Aww this is sad. .and to feel that way sux. . cuz i would know =[ . .
anyway great poem. . 5/5

I can seriously relate to this poem.

I'm living this right now..

--Ally