No feeling

by vanessa hill   May 23, 2006


I am at the party you said no to.
I am not drinking but most are.
I am not smoking but every1 else is.
My head is spinning, i think I'll get every1 that came with me and go.
My hearts pounding, i need to go.
I'm out the door getting in my car, but none of the ones that came with me are with me now.

I am headed home. I see a care coming.
He's not in his lane, he's in mine.
It's one of the guys from the party.
WE CRASH

I hear the cops coming, I black out.
I am in the hospital, i can't feel anything.
I ask "what happened?".
The nurse says "Your lucky to be alive. The driver of the other car was drunk. He's alright. He's car is totaled. Your car however theres nothing left of it. Your parents are at the scene looking for anything that could be important for anything. They'll be here soon."

"Mom your here"
the mom "Yes dear, I've seen the car and he's. I'm glad your alive."
"Mom"
"Yes dear"
"I can't feel anything."
"I know dear, your paralyzed!"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roxanne

    HEY WHATS UP YEAH I UNDERSTAND I'VE GOT ALOT GOIN ON IN MY LIFE TO SO YA KNOW...BUT N-EWAYS UMM... WHAT KIND OF THINGS ARE YOU GONIN THROUGH MAYBE I CAN HELP YOU! MAIL ME BACK

  • 18 years ago

    by teagan

    Did this really happen?