Hmm, this poem reveals a feeling of loneliness. It also has a hidden message of 'secrets'. Like you are hiding something, and it is why you are lonely. A very powerful poem. Great write.

This has to be one of my favorites you've written that I've read. Especially this stanza:

"Chained to my permanent sanctuary
Cold metal glides across my skin
Chained to memories terrible and haunting
I fear no one will save the girl within"

It's amazing never quit writing you have a lot of talent.

5/5

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