Awwww He cried.Omg..Thats soooo SWWEEEETTT..This poem was amazing and id cry if someone wrote this for me too
You expressed your love..Tremendously...That was just amazing...One of the Best..Great job
5/5
~MF~

AWESOME!!! 10/5

hey, lissa, i changed my user name. it's now stargirl49 as u can see. :)
xoxoxo
maggie

Very good poem. Like the others, it's to the point and paints a clear picture in your head. Sorry I'm not commenting on many, I'm busy with school finals, but I promise I'll comment more when they end.

-Paul

Awww... that is so sweet. It really made me want to cry! You did a great job at expressing your feelings on this and you described everything so well.. great job on this!

Terific!! i like this one the best. ur bf is lucky... ur seem pretty kool.

jenna

Wow soo much feeling i wish i could put all this in a poem