A sad little theory, to go with my sad little story....

by smile   May 23, 2006


--*Drink with the world!*--
One more sip to take me away.
--*Drink to your self*--
One more bottle and i'll be OK.

Hold up your head...
...A last drink to forget!
All that is wrong...
...Your trouble and regret.

Basically i drink...alot, i know i'm young, and carefree, but really, i drink far far too much and for all the wrong reasons. the last few lines of this are actually about the last drink, which kills you. kinda stupid i know.

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  • 18 years ago

    by chris

    Wow are me and you like the same person on different sides of the world, this is beautiful, i love this poem it just is me, but i am just amazed at through these poems its like i am talking to myself, and not like with most people but on some different level. sorry if that sounds to weird i promise im not like psychotic

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    It's a good theory, but it's not really very long, I think it would be interesting to see what it would look like if it was longer...Anyways, great job.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Nah this isn't stupid!!!
    and...sadly...i know the feeling. and i am far too young to know that.
    you seem amazingly talented, too. and i can't do it now, but when i have the time, i'll read a lot more of your poems.
    and so i won't forget, i'll add you to my favorites!
    take care,
    Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by hazzi

    This poem is really good I think it sends a great message to people and I think its good that you can openly admit that you drink more than you should :S lol a great poem and the words flow beautifully

    -xo-hazzi-xo-

  • 18 years ago

    by Steph Faragxx*

    This Poem Is So Real, We All Wish Drinking Could Do That.
    Great Poem
    Stephxx

    ****Thanx 4 The Comment****

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