Comments : A sad little theory, to go with my sad little story....

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Short and Interesting Lol
    I Feel this poem LoL
    I drink but just a few a day LoL
    FOR all the worries I have
    Thanks for comment :)
    Im going to read the rest of your poems
    This one got me started LoL

    Beautiful Boriua

  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    I can relate to this poem.. i used to drink all the time.. i liked this poem.. thanks for your comment on my poem xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew

    Hey,

    G8 poem, very interesting.
    i like, seriously
    thnx for your comments on my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by chavii

    Hey Smile ,

    A very diferent poem , liked it lot. But if only drinking could erase all pain ,life would be so easy.
    i like ur poems ,read couple of them ,keep up the gud work.

    Thanks for ur comment ,such comments always encourages to write more.

    take care
    chavii.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lying To Live

    Ok guirl dont drink even though i know it can be helpful till it wears off ....its doesnt help in the long run ....but ncie work anyways

    XoX *~CrImSon__TeArS~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Steph Faragxx*

    This Poem Is So Real, We All Wish Drinking Could Do That.
    Great Poem
    Stephxx

    ****Thanx 4 The Comment****

  • 18 years ago

    by hazzi

    This poem is really good I think it sends a great message to people and I think its good that you can openly admit that you drink more than you should :S lol a great poem and the words flow beautifully

    -xo-hazzi-xo-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Nah this isn't stupid!!!
    and...sadly...i know the feeling. and i am far too young to know that.
    you seem amazingly talented, too. and i can't do it now, but when i have the time, i'll read a lot more of your poems.
    and so i won't forget, i'll add you to my favorites!
    take care,
    Lauren

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    It's a good theory, but it's not really very long, I think it would be interesting to see what it would look like if it was longer...Anyways, great job.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by chris

    Wow are me and you like the same person on different sides of the world, this is beautiful, i love this poem it just is me, but i am just amazed at through these poems its like i am talking to myself, and not like with most people but on some different level. sorry if that sounds to weird i promise im not like psychotic