Broken

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   May 23, 2006


Broken Promises
Hideous Lies
Stupid Dreams
Sad Goodbyes
Angry Letters
Undersigned
Hate You Always
Never Kind

Understanding
Lost in the wind
All thats left
What you defend
And when you're broken
And you can't feel
You realize
All This is real

Nothing was a dream
No one even cared
And when you screamed
No one was there
You couldn't have changed it
All would forever be the same
As you lie here dieing
Screaming his name

All this the cause of love
Misunderstood
And when things went wrong
You did all that you could
Yet just to spite you
Only worse things became
Now you lying here dead
In you arm you've etched his name

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I could never have matched the personality you portrait on the forum and in my comments, with the one that writes this beautiful poetry. You should use that to your advantage. You have a talent, use it. Don't let your slang bring you down, you have a wide vocabulary of words, you don't need to use words like 'tight'. I mean, every now and then wouldn't hurt, but avoid it while you can. Another well written poem. Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Thats awesum...mwahh loved it..

  • 18 years ago

    by Alissa

    Awesome poem!!! Really sad... *sniff..tear* really flows together, really great!!!! 5/5!!!

    ~alissa

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