Awesome poem!!! Really sad... *sniff..tear* really flows together, really great!!!! 5/5!!!

~alissa

Thats awesum...mwahh loved it..

I could never have matched the personality you portrait on the forum and in my comments, with the one that writes this beautiful poetry. You should use that to your advantage. You have a talent, use it. Don't let your slang bring you down, you have a wide vocabulary of words, you don't need to use words like 'tight'. I mean, every now and then wouldn't hurt, but avoid it while you can. Another well written poem. Keep writing.