This poem is very good...even though sad! I wish I could some how help you, but for now I will just leave it at this. You are one of the better poets on here, and I love reading your poems!!!!!

5/5

~Hugs and Kisses~
Sabrina Nicole!

SAD! GOOD FLOW THO! IT WAS ALMOST LIKE A SAD STORY! =( I'M VERY SORRY! BUT GOOD WAY TO EXPRESS UR EMOTIONS, KEEP WRITING!

That poem was like an broken hearted story but you know that was just so sad...but it was amazing though! I am so sorry about your daughter...hopfully she is having a good life in God's arms. Everything will be alright...! But you know i loved this poem though, i cried so hard and i am still crying. All the words just fit so well within this poem...I wish i could say this story of life has a happy ending...</3

CourtneyxHolland
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Ahhh. :( I dont even know you and I feel bad for you! I wish that I could help you through some of this stuff, no body's life is perfect, and I like to have some one to talk to about my troubles too. I am sorry.

Very sad poem! im sorry for your loss! 5/5

This is a great poem
although I am very sad you had to go through what you did, I cant even imagine how much it must hurt but I send my love to you.
katrina

Sad poem , but describes your feelings .....

each one has ups and downs in this life

just be strong DEAR and you'll get everything

keep up the good work

Very sad, but you did a good job at expressing yourself. I can really relate to this piece, with each word, as sad as it is, i can relate. But youve really done an amaizng job. 5/5 stay strong.