StaleMate

by smile   May 23, 2006


We shiver as the winter chill freezes us.
Trapped in eternal darkness.

I'm frozen, unable to move,
Caught in a stare.

My mind has stopped
And there you are.

Your eyes are tired,
Fighting to stay open.

Your face the lightest blue,
Lips the deepest too.

Uncertain if your still alive,
I know i'm not.

my one true love and i, after we split, made it a mission to kinda hold out the longest, see who can give off the impression that they are not fazed by it, see who was strongest, so to say. anyways it got to the point where neither was, a kinda stalemate.

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  • 18 years ago

    by angele

    This poem is awesome!!
    short, but whole

  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Read your StaleMate makes me nearly frozen. It is great with a lot of cold feeling, I follow your writing got your emotion feeling. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxfairyxXxkissesxX

    Oh oh i love this one very well written great job 5 outa 5!!!! great

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow this is beautifully written. I really loved it. Especially the last two phrase were very very powerfull.

    Very well done =)

    Lotsaaaaaa love
    -xxx-