Wow this is beautifully written. I really loved it. Especially the last two phrase were very very powerfull.

Very well done =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
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Oh oh i love this one very well written great job 5 outa 5!!!! great

Read your StaleMate makes me nearly frozen. It is great with a lot of cold feeling, I follow your writing got your emotion feeling. Good job!

This poem is awesome!!
short, but whole