Rose

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 24, 2006


I give you, a bouquet of roses, with a note tied on,
It says "as long as they live, my love will never be gone"
Then you turn to me, and say "they last just a week!"
I say, "wait and you'll see" as I lay a kiss upon your cheek.

Months continue, just one rose alive after all this time,
You say "how can this be? Is this some kind of crime?"
With a puzzled look upon you sweet and gentle face,
I say, "can't you see, the last one will never need to replace.

It is plastic, darling baby, how could you not see that?
Did you think love would last just a week, and then go back?
It will never ever die, just like my love for you, I swear on this,
You are all I need in this world, you keep me in pure bliss!"

He turns to me and says, "This rose will be our love flame,
Flames go out in the wind, but this rose says my love will be the same.
Don't worry, I'll be fine, with you forever more,
I swear on this, forever you I'll adore."

~*Who Cares?*~

(NOT A TRUE STORY BUT I HAD SOMEONE IN MIND THE ENTIRE TIME. i hope 2 do this 2 some1 someday. Please Rate and Comment)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Thats like this quote i found somewhere once -

    My boyfriend gave me 11 roses, 10 real and 1 fake...then he said, when the last rose dies...thats when I'll stop loving you...

    I love how you've turned that into a poem :) Well done to I must say!
    So sweet!

    Jen
    Comment#9

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    I must comment on another...This is a very good poem. I really like your style.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    That poem was sweet~~ I really wanna find the guy who does that to me.. How sweet it will be?? awwwwwww It is also good poem!! Keep it up~