by Sh**tingst*r May 24, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
My whole world has been blackened. My very dear friend is leaving me. Today is your last day here. The last time you shall walk down those stairs. The last time you shall see the neighborhood. The last time our group of friends shall be together. |
by Sh**tingst*r
I'm saying that this might be the last time she see's me in this lifetime. That's why. But I'll change it anyway. Thanks for the comment!! |
I think you are contradicting yourself in the poem. First you write, "The last time you shall see me," and then, "I shall meet you again." It makes the poem seem insincere. I mean no offense! |