by Void May 24, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
One by one, let me undress the world behind my eyes. |
Metaphors were used brilliantly here...it was difficult to read for me thoi..the flow was good but i felt like i had to go back and reread it to get it...overall, nice concept and grrt job |
by Jessica
Wow! amazing poem.. so many metaphors, so much power, so excellent! i loved that.. very intense, 5/5! |
by Robie Lincer
Good poem :) |