Bitter memories stay but so does beautiful ones ,every experience , relationship teaches us new lesson.

U have penned ur feelings really nicely.

Take care
chavii.

Hey darl a very heartfelt p0em. very p0werful..

lOve frOm
d0ra

Nit, this is soooo sad.... but very good. i love the way you express yourself through your pen.
keep it up love.
hugs
el

Nice work EOS i really enjoyed reading this as i do all your other pieces keep it up xox me

Reality bites, doesnt it? Yeah, I know what you mean here. You described it so well. I'm amazed. Absolutely loved it. But I do hope your reality changes one day. Great work!!!

Love
Michelle

Omg.. this poem just ate my heart up ( i hope that made sense.. lol )... it's soo touching... it just pierced my soul...
I could feel the pain in each word..
very well written..

(hhaha.. sadness, i've lived in every corner of it... just remember that ok.. )

Definetly 5/5

Much love,
ipsita

Sad and very powerful use of emotions. i do hope you are okay, my friend.

take care for friends are always there..

peace and prayers
shobhana

Hey, this is great and so true..doesnt it suck that thingz alwayz happen that way? im sure one day u'll find the one u wanna be with, great job 5/5..i know what you mean...you just start to feel thingz fading after awhile eh
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow.. this is really good.. reminded me of one of my past relationships. You did a great job on this. You had some great word usage and it definitely fit well with the point you were trying to make. Great job on this.

Sad, but good writing. Good work! Keep it up!

I love it. Very well written.
Check mine out
Morana

Wow this is so very great!
you hv a good point thou!
wonderful poem hun!
hope you're okay and sorry for my late comment :S
NemO x00x0x0x0xx

Sometimes dont you wish life could turn out differently? but it never will.
i felt every word as it twisted my heart.
relationships teach us new things, but we always end up hurt in the end.

but as the riddle of life keeps on drifting for so long
i never knew in every relation boredom also comes along
^i love this line
you know your feelings very well

xxxx

Well this is very true sometimes and onky who find themselves in such situations can feel the misery. i liked it very much

love

Very true......this is so deep....i dont hav words to praise......u hav said so much.....

all d best
luv

I hate starting a comment with wow... but wow...
Such a sad poem that while reading it you can almost feel the pain..
"that just like other melting flowers our love is fading too"
And such beautiful words..
It proves that even in times of sadness, your talent doesn't desert you.
Well done...
5/5
*Gem*

The emotions in this poem are very deep and sad. I can feel your inner pain calling out. Great job! Take Care Cindy