Painfully loving you

by smile   May 24, 2006


Time to awake,
Lost hours of sleep.
Dripping red,
Cutting me deep.

Sharpe blades
Pierce the line,
Sliding through form
Yours to mine.

A silent scream,
You squeeze this pain,
Only to see
It's you to blame.

About a totally screwed up relationship, which was just so unbelievably painful, this guy was so nasty to me, so so horrible, but he swears that he loved me. he'd get me all mentally tired and upset, and totally break my spirt. Then he'd feel guilty and try to make it up, with expenses and beautiful gifts. Anyways he couldn't see how much he hurt me, and diddn't understand my misery.

also why have i got more comments on this poem, than votes...? do you people not rate me...ah well, not to worry.
i personally rate more than comment.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    Wow, i really liked that. short, but got to the point. 5/5 forsure.

  • Awwww! What a mean guy!
    I'll give you 5/5
    You give inspiration for those who have a bad realationship :)

  • 18 years ago

    by livingwith

    Hey my email is frenchfriestonight@yahoo.com, email me if you can alright, just let me know who you are. I'll do what i can, and if all ells, i'll be glad to be a friend, and a good ear.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew

    Wow, that is a gr8 poem!
    wonderfully written.
    i like the way you have managed to fit so much emotion into so few lines.
    5/5 as i sed b4, gr8 poem

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTearDropxX

    Short but meaning full. i loved this poem. it had so much emoshion for a short poem. good job and keep up the good work!

    Much love,
    *Jessica*