It could last

by smile   May 24, 2006


Laid on a bed,
I place my palms,
For every other
Life flys past.

It's not fair that
their all saved,
When all they had
Was all we gave.

Abandoned love
Abused and trashed,
Not knowing...
It could last

Wow i love this so much! me and my one true love broke up, we were so perfect, so so wonderful together. proper little sweet hearts, and everyone wanted to be in a relationship just half as good. so when we broke up everyone was really heartbroken too, and many people think it was a waste, and even now yrs later so many persons would love to see us together!

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  • 18 years ago

    by livingwith

    I like how you explain the poems, your good and for the first time i get lost in your poems. buy it is really sad