Comments : Goodbye for a while

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Such a sweet dedication.. nice ot see close ties with people from P&Q.. i thot it rhymed well, tho the flow was off at times.. i liked the last stanza.. kinda cute..
    4/5
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Thanks gemma this means a lot to me I'm going to miss you and everyone else very much but I will be back (I'm here till the end of next week) See ya in the next life

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    Awww how cute!! The only thing I probably would've changed was making it into couplets maybe? I dunno VERY CUTE THOUGH!!

    4/5

    joy*:.xx