Cant you see

by dustinl90   May 24, 2006


Cant you see,
you belong to me.
How my poor heart aches,
with every step you take.

Cant you see,
you hurt me.
But I still love you,
with every step you take.

Cant you see,
I want you back.
you know it,
you made my heart crack
with every step you take....

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  • 18 years ago

    by briana

    I like it! you did good! * bre bre *

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    That poem made me realize how the person on the other end of a lot of relationships may feel! you have taught me something new today, and for that i thank you! maybe you could teach me some other new things by checking out my poems and letting know what you think about them! thanks a lot!

    **meggie**

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    It's okay and if this person cant see this than you can do better. Dont keep putting yourself out there like that. If they wont take you back move on because from what i can tell you are a great person with a lot to offer. Someone out there will want you.

    xox Tiffany

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Wow this poem is brilliant
    i can really relate to it
    well done...5/5

    xXxXcomment/rate meXxXx
    ----------i'll always reply back!--------

    **smile**

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