I like it u dun good your right

I like it alot also. Good job.

Hey, ive been reading most of your poems, and i really like your style! seriously, your v talented. they all lovely to read, and the subjects you write about i think happen to people, but people dont speak about them freely. i especially liked this poem. and this line is so true :Hopes and dreams are diminished everyday
Mostly because people can't find the words to say.
keep it up!