You make me think twice when I'm speaking to you
Is he lying or telling the truth

^^^oh so true, i can definetly relate^^^

Some moments hurt more me more than others
Like the times I miss you and your brother

^^I used to be with a kid, and still really really like him, but anyways.... whenever we were or are apart, i really miss him and his brother, so those lines really stood out to me!

yep once again, very true>>But I have to stay strong
I was holding on for too long

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**meggie**

Good job i like it

Totally can relate to this one. good job.