Love is life

by Uzair   May 24, 2006


Love is life
Without love, there is no life
With love you get a key
This key is the key to success
I've lost that love
And I've lost my key
Whats the point of living without you?
Without you, I'm nothing
Without you, I'm incomplete
Without you, I have no key
Without you, I don't deserve to live
Love has shown me true happiness
Love has shown me true sadness
Without you, I'm nothing
Without you, I'm no one

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    That was beautiful! keep it up!
    5/5!
    -Bloomed Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Uzair

    Its a good poem, i wrote it when i was in love:) For those of you who arent in love, love is quite like this. Its the best thing that can ever happen to you. When you're in love, everything turns out your way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I liked the way you described love...like the most important thing in someone's life...Because it is.

    Great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good expression and flow to this peice. only minor fault i have is the line "This key is the key to success" the word key just seems over used.. otherwise great peice

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow uzi! thats such an excellent poem! i really love it! it flows well and there was a lot of emotion put into it.. i could really feel your hurt! keep up the good work! 5/5

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