by Brooke Thompson May 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
The old ones speak of Death |
by Sean Allen
Interesting. A bit too short to critique very well. The diction was pretty mature, and I'd say there was a fledgling rhythm being developed, though it was once again too short for a full-blown rhythm. |
This sounds like something I would say about things my grandfather talks about. I like it. |