Beautifully written. Your way with words sends the reader on a journey through passionate remembrance.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

This was a beautiful poem, and I completely agree with the comment made above by Holly Armer, couldn't have said it any better myself. You're truely talented. 5/5.

I also very much so appreciate the comment you left on my older account [.killer queen.], it was very nice. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. ^-^

This poem will stand the test of time. A beautiful love poem with this seniment is felt by so many, You have expressed the feelings so well. Excellent write.

I love your poetry because I feel like I can relate to it. A wonderfully bittersweet write!

~dandy~

I can completely connect with the words in this. Thank you for the kind words bro on my work also.
Take care.

Very beautiful. I enjoyed this write a lot. You are one of those poets who does free verse very well, and because of that I'm learning to like it! lol I've always been a rhymer, but lately have experimented (sp?) with free verse. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you for all your kind comments. It's nice to have a new reader who actually TELLS you what they think. Thank you so much!
Charisma*

Beautifully penned. I love the imagery. Great job!

As i keep reading its getting far better...i truly love ur poems...for they speak what u feel
excellent job
and wat a sweet way to say thank u...

This was a beautiful peice!
Your emotion is so strong and even though there wasn't any rhyme the flow was still great!
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Also thanks for the comment =]

Thanks for the comment :]

I love this piece... the ending is extremely sweet. When did you start writing poetry in general?