Very imaginative poemand i have fallen in love with it.
Brilliant
xox Bev

I like how you put this one together.

I think you should add a little bit more in the middle and make it suspensful ya know?

Good job.

Wow this one is very deep and kind of dark i guess that's why you put it in the dark poems section:) This one is my favorite of your poems:) keep writing you have a gift!:)

Hey hun i love your poem very dark indeed i loved the way you described your feelings it had so much emotion in a scarey way lol i loved it so much 5/5 no wait 10/5 even xoxroxyxox aka emily your best buddy hehe