Suicidal Kiss

by Silently Screaming   May 24, 2006


Tattered and torn

Fading away

Pieces of me

Empty and drained

Broken and cold

Dying alone

Scared and confused

No one's amused

Cutting my wrist

My suicidal kiss

*it's not totally done yet but i made it in class today.... tell me what u think??*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    It is an exact replica of depression. except that not everyone cuts during depression it depends ontheir strenght. but ur poem is really good and its simple.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mysterious Enigma

    Nice emotions in there, short and concise and you could do a lot more with it... but i think you're planning on doind that already...

    Synical

  • 18 years ago

    by MidNightBeauty

    I liked it..keep it up

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