Rememberance

by tom   May 24, 2006


Take this mind
take this life
for god sake please!
take away my knife
i cant bleed no more
i cant stand the sores
my minds a blank
in the ocean i sank
i once was afloat
and this poem i wrote

to remember the good old days

show me the way
show me the path
remind me the way
i used to laugh
cross me off
strike me down
do i look like
a god damn clown
ill drown in the moat
after this poem i wrote

to remember the good old ways

come one come all
i bet youd love to see me fall
you always seemed
to put me down
you just looked
and i fell to the ground
the rain is falling onto my face
i feel like such a discrace
so i worte this poem

to remember my screwed up ways, cause now ive changed

please tell me what you think, ill do the same to your poems

thanks, love & peace tom xx

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney

    Thats cool i like the flow of it

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Aww your an amazing writer
    i can onlywirte about the same things day in day out
    very good
    5/5
    love you =]
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx