Okay, well i am known for leaving "sweet" comments, but im not 100% sure that this one is going to be so "sweet", no offense. So, this poem was good, without a doubt, it had good meaning and good depth to it, but the caps, and the roughness of the rythme both kinda threw me off a little bit. For some reason, people, like myself, aren't as attracted to poems in full caps (

Just a tip) but anyways... if felt you emotions coming through and i could feel how you must be feeling right now, so for that i say i liked it,. and that you really did a good job!

**meggie**

Hahah its pretty good