Madd good, tha endin is perfect

This poem is really good!!! i love it ... is how i feel about a guy i love to death but i cant be with him cuz he lives in california and hes 21. he loves me too its just the fact the we live so far away and the fact that im datin someone else that i used to love but idk it just not there for me anymore ... but i cant break up with him cuz i a;ways go back to him. and i also have a kid with him. i really hate love sometimes ..... well great poem!!! 5/5