Wow! This poem is really good! The flow and rhyme are excellent! I also like the meaning of it. I really liked the ending about how the human crushed the flower, it is really powerful. Oh and breathe I think you meant breath. Great Job! 5/5

Oh that was beautiful! You really portrayed reality in a unique way. I loved the idea and everything. Excellent work. 5/5

Wow.. this was excellent! i loved the metaphoric way the poem flowed.. it was just excellent! the emotion was clear, it flowed well, and the descriptions and message were great! 5/5

This was a really good poem, and it is very true. We are careless, and as well, wreckless. Is it really human nature? or is it something we have done to ourself? A really good write, it gets a person thinking.

Only one thing about this poem. I believe 'pedal' should be 'petal' if you are talking about the flowers.

Wreckless we humans are.. so stay out of the kitchen : P

Good stuff.

Beautiful! that was such a great poem
you could feel emotion in it, great job!
definately 5/5

I don't know what to say. One of the few poems that had my attention from start to finish and left me with no suggestions. (It's rare but there are breath taking poems here and yours is one of them) Maybe break it up but then again I htink this length doesn't matter. Your words capitivate the reader with unbelievable imagery and a clear message.

Amazing poem the flow was so perfect very creative and even so its very true great job.

This poem is so beautiful, I love it. I love the message of human nature, and I love how your poem is written. It has good flow and rhyming, it kept my atttention.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Great poem! It was really beautiful, had a great glow to it, and a really great message! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

Really Really Really liked this one.... A few spelling mistakes, and some grammatical errors but overall well written... the whole poem flowed and the rhyming words worked