Incomplete without you

by Landon Carter   May 24, 2006


It's the night without light with no life
It's the dark place where I am and no one is
It’s my love calling out for you and seeking you
It’s the rain trying to please me
It’s the moon trying to shine on me
The stars trying to give me hope
But it's me incomplete without you yet having them all

Yes, it's me at the darkest place in the world with no hopes
Am cold not bold
Dark not bright
I’m shattered not gathered
I want you, need you
To be bright, to be in light

Why are my eyes now torn?
How come we don’t talk anymore?
It is finished not vanished
Oh honey I still love you and always will
Come to me and hug me
Let's love and make the world

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Am cold not bold
    ((Am cold, not bold))
    Dark not bright
    ((Dark, not bright))
    I’m shattered not gathered
    ((I'm shattered, not gathered))

    Why are my eyes now torn?
    ((I love these lines..))

    This is a bit better.. You display your emotions better in this and it was better written. Nicely done.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5