by *~vixen~* May 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The sky springs to life, the suns fingers strumming at the black and blue |
Yeah I got it right too =0) This poem was just so beautifully written, strong words and strong meaning, caught me from the beginning to the end. I have never read a poem like this one, very unique...Keep up the good work |
by *~vixen~*
Hey J.Lau got the hidden meaning great job! |
by J Lau
Great use of imagery and clever intertwine of music and nature... the symphony of nature... This poem seems to dwell in the night and the darkness of "life"... disguised with the general perception of nature's beauty. How the writer longs for the glorious and beautiful life during the day, which sadly may not be the case in the writer's daily life. Great write! 5/5 |
Some amazing imegry in this peice, and such powerful use of vocab and description. i do not think i found any hiden meaning as such in this peice, but the actual writting and structure are fantastic. |
by amber
This poems was exellent i love it!!!! this poem is very descriptive and i like that a lot about your poem!!!!! this is beyond a 5 it like 100 times better than 5!!! |