by Jen
Wow this poem is like... really descpriptive and you've got a great talent for imagry. Your poem is so deep and intense, its incredible. You've got a strong vocabulary and thats always a good thing... is this poem about love? Just a guess. definately 5/5 -Jen- |
by Darien
Well, there was a mixture of imagery and references to music in the poem. The images were deep, dark and depressing, while the music was quite the opposite. I'm not quite sure the 'point' you are making, but I have a clue to as what is going on in the poem. |
by Jessica
Good imagery! this poem was very intence and confusing.. lol! very good use of language and great descriptions! 5/5 |
by amber
This poems was exellent i love it!!!! this poem is very descriptive and i like that a lot about your poem!!!!! this is beyond a 5 it like 100 times better than 5!!! |
Some amazing imegry in this peice, and such powerful use of vocab and description. i do not think i found any hiden meaning as such in this peice, but the actual writting and structure are fantastic. |
by J Lau
Great use of imagery and clever intertwine of music and nature... the symphony of nature... This poem seems to dwell in the night and the darkness of "life"... disguised with the general perception of nature's beauty. How the writer longs for the glorious and beautiful life during the day, which sadly may not be the case in the writer's daily life. Great write! 5/5 |
by *~vixen~*
Hey J.Lau got the hidden meaning great job! |
Yeah I got it right too =0) This poem was just so beautifully written, strong words and strong meaning, caught me from the beginning to the end. I have never read a poem like this one, very unique...Keep up the good work |