Heartbreaking sad, especially this stanza, brought a tear to my eye

"As she falls onto the floor
The tears fall from her eye
She wonders who will be the one
To tell her mom goodbye"

Yet you did an excellent job, keep up the great poems 5/5

Wow....I am speechless. I gasped at the turning point of the poem. I am now in love with your poem. Is it ok if I put this poem on my website??
Check mine out sometime.
Morana

Wow i really like this one..keep up the great work

xoxo Sarah

Omg thats so sad...but i really like the flow of the poem 5/5

Yooo! i like that it was sad, but i gotta ask was that true?

I like it :)

Amazing poem..i reallyyy liked it!

xX-Katherine-Xx

BOY, do I LOVE a good tragedy! 5/5, my talented friend!

I like this............ is it true

This is a very good poem it reminds me of a shooting near where i live!!!
5/5
~sara~

This is my favorite poem on this whole website, im like obsessed with it lol. it rocksss. keep writing =)

WOW! that was really good!! i luv how u write ur poemz so descriptive without saying too much, but u say it perfectly for ppl to understand, unlike i can do! lol...thx for the comment tho n if u wanna talk sum time, i'm here for u too! take care! luvz!
*Jo*

Omg this poem was great it nearly made me cry!! all your poems are excellent they have such emotion in them! i wish i could write as fluently as you!!
5/5 luv DarkCookie

That was a beautiful piece of poetry you captured the moment and emotions so well. congrats on such a great poem. loved it! 5/5

OMG I DONT KNOW WHAT TO EVEN SAY !!! YOUR A DAMN GOOD WRITER