Hes gone

by Carly   May 25, 2006


He said he'd wait
help me through my past
he said he'd wait
i was a fool to think it would last
he told me that he loved me
but now he loves her
he told me he loved me
but now its all a blur.
this happened so fast
you never warned me
this happened so fast

you mean the world to me
don't give up on me now
you mean the world to me
but you killed me, so stand up and take a bow.
you said maybe in the future
and god how i hope...
you said maybe in the future
but i don't know if i can cope
please realize you love me
and kiss me again
please realize you love me
and say you love me..yet again

i have never felt such hurt
this feeling inside?
how could you leave me?
so teary eyed.
i love you.
you love me, i know it
shes rebound, so show it.

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  • 17 years ago

    by mazie

    This was reli gd well done and soz dat he hurt u but if he cant see how much u love him how gd u r he not worth it but neway reli gd poem i luved it well penned 5/5.MazieX
    (ps fanx 4 da comment on my poem)

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda?!

    The little red number just means the number of new comments you've gotten since the last time you've logged in, haha.

    btw, im adding you to my favorites. =]=]

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda?!

    "you love me, i know it
    shes rebound, so show it"

    thats got to be one of the greatest lines ive ever heard, like im not even lying lol

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Hey i read your comment on someones poem, (not mine!) but anywayz, their poems relate to you, but also they relate to me. so that must kinda mean that that were going through similar things, bad break up.
    i've read your poem and i think it's good. you should read some of my work, tell us what you think.
    you'd probally like it. most of it is about love and stuff, but not about being in love, more of the hurtin' side, bit like yours.
    anyways can't chat forever, keep in touch?

    **smile**

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