by erotema May 25, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
True perfection is spoken no more plainly than in a blank canvas. art is no friend to perfection. the artist's stroke serves to make known his deepest thoughts, a labour of love. he is a slave to his master -- his art -- a loving servitude in a dark cellar, where oils and paints speak volumes of memories and visions, ne'er seen by another. |
by J Lau
Normally, I would suggest to work on the flow, however, in your case it suits the theme and poem. It's actually cleverly done... from an artist's point of view, having his own style and written with an artist's frame of mind... Great write. 5/5 |
by Darien
This poem was more of a few statements put together, in an artistic form. Since the poem speaks of art not being perfect, it suited this piece. Awesome job. |
by Natalie
The way you opened up this poem was good, and the way you ended it. You placed everything and worded everything beautifuly. Awesome job! 5/5 |