The way you opened up this poem was good, and the way you ended it. You placed everything and worded everything beautifuly. Awesome job! 5/5

`taleee xx

This poem was more of a few statements put together, in an artistic form. Since the poem speaks of art not being perfect, it suited this piece. Awesome job.

Normally, I would suggest to work on the flow, however, in your case it suits the theme and poem. It's actually cleverly done... from an artist's point of view, having his own style and written with an artist's frame of mind... Great write. 5/5