My secret world opened
On a cold, dark night
Beneath my feet, I was dragged under
In fear I turned around
Behind me I could see horrors beyond suffering
I screamed as it grew pitch black
It felt like a distant memory
Mist clouding my mind
I choked on fresh air, waking up by the silver moon
The only thing I heard was my silent echo...
As I gazed up in wonder at the new world I found.
Very descriptive i like that about it,
im not into the 'non-rhyming' poetry. but this was quite good.
congrats on coming 2nd.
was a very good poem.
5/5
emma