Wut a great poem and how u ended was so clever.

all the best and write more

Its a dream of mass dear and so is the reality after waking up, but i m glad that u brought this theme and presented it in such a beautifull manner, great write indeed

all the best and take care

Nice poem!

What a nice poem! And so well written... Great job!

Wow, this poem is so great, as I was reading it. I hoped at less there is one of us here who got the perfect life, but then again the dream world.I know how it feels, so meaningful. so greatly written.
buhat acha hai.muje buhat acha laga.
keep it up.5/5

Beautiful penned you potray here, yet well expressive emotions, you've a gift of tallent like a river, but hopefully you keep them coming..anyway, thanks for you nice comment, much appreciated, take care, best wishes! bert ~

"But every morning i open my eyes ,
the dreamworld vanishes, only bitter realities come to sight"

I never saw that ending coming. I was lost in the paradise you were describing and then that last couplet was just a wake up call.. a splash of cold water.
Excellent write
5/5
*Gem*