Ashes And Dust

by End Of Eternity   May 25, 2006


Here down below the face of the crust
there's a horizontal clay with open eyes
and on the other side people hardly trust
while they walk ignoring our silent cries

trying to find a difference between love & lust
as flashback runs behind my eyes again
sleeping here with my own ashes and dust
visualizing you driving someone else insane

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    Your poetry fascinates me. The images you paint with your words are awesome.

    trying to find a difference between love & lust
    as flashback runs behind my eyes again
    sleeping here with my own ashes and dust
    visualizing you driving someone else insane

    Love the entire poem yaar.These lines really make one think.
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    This is absolutely amazing! Brilliant!

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    I m speechless.......kya likhte ho yaar...so deep
    5/5
    keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Strong one .

    all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow, this poem is good..required a certain amount of reading over to catch the actual meaning but If you're really good at anazlyizing it catches up. It's a real good poem, keep it up.
    -Sara

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