Hey chick.this poem is pretty awesome lol..i know exactly who ur talking about 2 lol..but yeah keep writting..ur doin good...well lotz of love..

You have a nice start,but i think you should make it longer!! Great job though!!

Aww.. thats sad.. there was quite alot of emotion in this.. but i felt it was lacking a bit in description and the rhymes were a bit awkward.. but it was good! keep working at it! :)

Oh, how sad... I read your post. My only advice is to move on, and take some down-time from your life to heal, if you can.

//T.L.//

Getting your heart broken can hard but more love will come.. online i am on your side!
=)

add me as a frend if you like... keep up the good work were all here for each other.

I had to read it again so y not comment uh? lol. it was a really well writen poem, i noticed u couldnt come up w/ some other word for time, eheh, but i still like it. i can not rate it again so i'll jus say 5/5