Love For You.

by Russian Bridge   May 25, 2006


I see you everyday.
But the love i feel for you isn't love, its pain.
Because every time I'm see you.
And I'm not with you.
I die a million deaths
So all i have in my life, is my love for you.
But we will never be together due two simple facts.
1. The lies that have spread between me and you.
2. And the way that i look at you and theres no look back.
Breaks the remainder of my hurt.
The rest you already have.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hmm.. This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of the lines seemed a little messed up. I liked the message behind it though. It was good. Keep writing. 4/5 Sorry.

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Good poem. IT was 4/5, but you are good at writting, so 5

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Short and too the point. Just for you, you should capitalize I and you wrote "their" when you should have written "there"...I gave it a {5/5} but it prolly deserved {4/5}

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandria

    I really liked this. I definitely know how you can feel and your poem really made me feel the sadness again, but it was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Vampire_Freak

    Thats so sad :[