by Russian Bridge May 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I see you everyday. |
by Natalie
Hmm.. This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of the lines seemed a little messed up. I liked the message behind it though. It was good. Keep writing. 4/5 Sorry. |
by Darien
Good poem. IT was 4/5, but you are good at writting, so 5 |
by PygmyPuff
Short and too the point. Just for you, you should capitalize I and you wrote "their" when you should have written "there"...I gave it a {5/5} but it prolly deserved {4/5} |
by Alexandria
I really liked this. I definitely know how you can feel and your poem really made me feel the sadness again, but it was really good. |
Thats so sad :[ |